First Draft (2) of my Movie Poster

So here I completely changed the concept and layout of my poster to suit a more sophisticated audience.

I asked 10 of my target audience then to give me constructive feedback:

1. Needs an age rating.
2. Possibly change of font in places.
3. Needs a star rating.
4. Missing rating box.
5. Excellent composition and imagery.
6. Like the illustration, lacking colour though.
7. Very dark, try brighten it up in places.
8. Nice structure and drawing, wouldn't change it.
9. Make font bolder in places to stand out more.
10. Love it! So eye-catching!